Friday, 2 August 2013

Five Sentence Fiction ~ Bliss

This weeks word is Bliss and here is mine:

Photograph by Bekah Shambrook


Roxy stared around the room, wondering where the delightful aroma was coming from.When she found it she stared up at the person eating it and started to drool, long strings of saliva dripped from her jowls. Every spoonful teased her and she inched closer gazing with her big puppy dog eyes.
She stared at the tormenting tub of vanilla ice-cream, full of enticing pieces of cookie dough and toffee.
Her owner smiled down and offered the tub with the last spoonful and Roxy was in blissful heaven.



14 comments:

  1. Beautiful!

    I've seen this picture many, many times!

    Puppies are the best thing next to children!

    I enjoyed your prose, Cait!

    Thank you!

    Od Liam

    You look as Celt, like me! :))

    ReplyDelete
  2. Thank you for your comment... :)I am very pleased that you enjoyed it.I love puppy dogs too.... :)

    ReplyDelete
  3. Who couldn't share at least a little? Nice story!

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. That is true.... Especially when they use their puppy eyes... ;)

      Delete
  4. I had a bbq last week and my dog spent the entire time sniffing from one person to the next. Her attention completely dictated by who was holding food.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. That is just like Roxy, she would stare at anyone with food.... :)

      Delete
  5. Very evocative. Nice job with the prompt!

    ReplyDelete
  6. Aw. This is cute and beautifully written; no one can resist puppy dog eyes. Well done Chicken. x

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thank you for your comment... And I totally agree, no one can resist puppy dog eyes... ;)

      Delete
  7. We had a dog that loved custard and usually got it when we did from a nearby convenience store.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Yes, that is exactly like our dog.... If we have trifle she just stares at us waiting for the food, but she normally just gets the tub... ;)

      Delete
  8. Cool, Roxy just loves ice-cream! Love this Cait! x

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. I know she would eat it all the time if we let her.... ;)

      Delete